Excellent work. Already strong MERIT and nearly at distinction. You need to make much more of your own idea though - it should be the heart of this presentation but it is only a little sub-section of a circle. Bring it out and make it much more substantial - use images to give the mood etc. SHow how it will use various persuasion techniques and maybe AIDA. Then at the end relate the bcap codes more carefully to your ad.
Excellent work. Already strong MERIT and nearly at distinction. You need to make much more of your own idea though - it should be the heart of this presentation but it is only a little sub-section of a circle. Bring it out and make it much more substantial - use images to give the mood etc. SHow how it will use various persuasion techniques and maybe AIDA. Then at the end relate the bcap codes more carefully to your ad.
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