This is another really good first draft, you have covered everything necessary and you have managed to cover it in a lot of detail.
I have awarded a merit for this post but you are very nearly at a distinction, to get a distinction you need to make sure that you have not copied any information without putting it in quotation marks and sourcing it (I can see some bits that have been copied without acknowledgement).
Vlad,
ReplyDeleteThis is another really good first draft, you have covered everything necessary and you have managed to cover it in a lot of detail.
I have awarded a merit for this post but you are very nearly at a distinction, to get a distinction you need to make sure that you have not copied any information without putting it in quotation marks and sourcing it (I can see some bits that have been copied without acknowledgement).
Well done again Vlad,
EllieB
Well done Vlad, distinction achieved.
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